Sunday, February 25, 2007

Haiku attempt #2


Also
then, God and I
only used to start with letters capital.
Now, I am alone god.



For those who have no inkling of what the above is, may I be immodest enough to suggest to check out haiku attempt#1.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Improving

Pagli Ladki said...

"Ahm Brahmasmi" goes the sanskrit adage; & rightly so gets reflected here.

I liked the thought behind this Haiku, but (if I may tamper with your creation) would have it this way -

"Erstwhile twas God and I
solely having the privilege of big beginnings
Now I am my god"

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