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"Ahm Brahmasmi" goes the sanskrit adage; & rightly so gets reflected here. I liked the thought behind this Haiku, but (if I may tamper with your creation) would have it this way - "Erstwhile twas God and I solely having the privilege of big beginnings Now I am my god"
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Improving
"Ahm Brahmasmi" goes the sanskrit adage; & rightly so gets reflected here.
I liked the thought behind this Haiku, but (if I may tamper with your creation) would have it this way -
"Erstwhile twas God and I
solely having the privilege of big beginnings
Now I am my god"
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